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Originally Posted by chokeonsmoke
ESAY'S AND AMIGOS FREESTYLE OFF THE DOME
Originally Posted by General Johnson
You know what OP, I don't know if it's the Jack talking to me or if I just have a heart (just checked, I don't) but you ain't that bad. I mean, you ain't Soulja Boy bad...
Your lyrics were alright and that second track wasn't unbearable, but you do need some work and your hook game is, eh...
You're doing something positive and if the lyrics in your second track are true, don't succumb to the evils. Stay on your grind with that hip hop, but don't come out asking for opinions until you are truly confident that you have reached the level that you are striving for.
Good luck.
Originally Posted by MusicalExcellence
Originally Posted by General Johnson
You know what OP, I don't know if it's the Jack talking to me or if I just have a heart (just checked, I don't) but you ain't that bad. I mean, you ain't Soulja Boy bad...
Your lyrics were alright and that second track wasn't unbearable, but you do need some work and your hook game is, eh...
You're doing something positive and if the lyrics in your second track are true, don't succumb to the evils. Stay on your grind with that hip hop, but don't come out asking for opinions until you are truly confident that you have reached the level that you are striving for.
Good luck.
too latehttp://www.zshare.net/audio/73799608141bc8dc/
thats the OP... from this post...Originally Posted by MOEree5e
Originally Posted by MusicalExcellence
Originally Posted by General Johnson
You know what OP, I don't know if it's the Jack talking to me or if I just have a heart (just checked, I don't) but you ain't that bad. I mean, you ain't Soulja Boy bad...
Your lyrics were alright and that second track wasn't unbearable, but you do need some work and your hook game is, eh...
You're doing something positive and if the lyrics in your second track are true, don't succumb to the evils. Stay on your grind with that hip hop, but don't come out asking for opinions until you are truly confident that you have reached the level that you are striving for.
Good luck.
too latehttp://www.zshare.net/audio/73799608141bc8dc/
who is that?
thanks ....Originally Posted by VINTAGE SOLE 737
not bad... better than most of what gets "worn out" on mainstream radio. keep working hard, you have a whole lifetime for improvement.