Hey Niketalk, youre pretty honest right?

[hotshots24]

So...i have no equipment or anything like that, and i NEED honesty now, from you guys, i dont know anywhere else to get solid feedback, so im hoping you guys can help me out here...
Please, just for once, id like solid feedback. Thank you & God Bless

http://www.youtube.com/wa...dsS8_Y&feature=email

i'm an amateur, guys please dont be to harsh.

 

[Mactastic4167]

info on the V-neck, sweater vest? lol, naw it sounds ok

 

[frijo sneaker]

I dont know about u having Ipod Headphone on the Video, and the yellow background is Wack!

 

[chino905]

well at least this one was better than the previous ones you posted on here

 

[outbackbob24]

So...i have no equipment or anything like that, and i NEED honesty now, from you guys, i dont know anywhere else to get solid feedback, so im hoping you guys can help me out here...
Please, just for once, id like solid feedback. Thank you & God Bless

http://www.youtube.com/wa...dsS8_Y&feature=email

i'm an amateur, guys please dont be to harsh.
What exactly do you want fee back on? the video? the music?

Regardless all of it was garbage. Just stop. stop it now.

ill take some nudes of that shorty though

 

[russ tha g]

Considering you record under a towel, the sound quality was actually pretty decent. I did not care for the song, though.

 

[5am6oody72]

It wasn't that bad but for some reason the video had me dying

 

[hotshots24]

Originally Posted by outbackbob24

So...i have no equipment or anything like that, and i NEED honesty now, from you guys, i dont know anywhere else to get solid feedback, so im hoping you guys can help me out here...
Please, just for once, id like solid feedback. Thank you & God Bless

http://www.youtube.com/wa...dsS8_Y&feature=email

i'm an amateur, guys please dont be to harsh.

What exactly do you want fee back on? the video? the music?

Regardless all of it was garbage. Just stop. stop it now.

ill take some nudes of that shorty though

so whyd you ask for what i need feedback on...if its all garbage haha, thanks man.

 

[hotshots24]

Originally Posted by 5am6oody72

It wasn't that bad but for some reason the video had me dying

haha you laughing...ill just take it as a compliment man haha

 

[darth dnzy]

--Kinda catchy. You can sing/flow better than me homes.

 

[tsx24]

to be honest you look like your trying WAY too hard. not smooth at all

 

[mondaynightraw]

Video was

 

[messyyy]

song is decent but OP u look like a square, dancin and hella cheesin lol

 

[lakersfan1]

its good but like the other people said the dancing is cheesy and the yellow background was awkward 

 

[elpablo21]

Dream a Dream a Dream a Dream about you Dreaming a Dream about you Dreaming about me or whatever the %$#% you said

 

[lol]

lol

 

[hotshots24]

Originally Posted by Lakersfan1

its good but like the other people said the dancing is cheesy and the yellow background was awkward 

sorry man >< like i said...im not a raper or anything, i just really like rap and hip hop, im a certified square

 

[sighfur]

you can't be serious...

song sucks.

 

[ispeakjewleo]

I've seen better but keep working on it fam

 

[capone125]

Originally Posted by Elpablo21

Dream a Dream a Dream a Dream about you Dreaming a Dream about you Dreaming about me or whatever the %$#% you said

I liked the beat tho.  Probably woulda liked the whole thing a lot more if the video was just a black screen with the song playing in the background.

 

[5am6oody72]

Originally Posted by hotshots24

Originally Posted by 5am6oody72

It wasn't that bad but for some reason the video had me dying

haha you laughing...ill just take it as a compliment man haha

Good to see you take it in stride, I think I was laughing more at the low budgetness of the video than anything.

And

sorry man >< like i said...im not a raper or anything

 

[soleasian]

more video time of the girl in less/no clothes and you'll be a hit

 

[tsx24]

Originally Posted by hotshots24

Originally Posted by Lakersfan1

its good but like the other people said the dancing is cheesy and the yellow background was awkward 

1. sorry man >< like i said...im not a raper or anything, i just really like rap and hip hop, im a certified square
   

im glad you're not a raper but stop being a rapper

 

[ii jovo ii]

Do much hand movement man, you look like one of those people stuck in a box trying to get out

 

[garcia y vega]

Your movements are very flamboyant.