Brandon Tyler - Dyck Van Dike

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Dyck Van Dike is the first single for Brandon Tyler's debut mixtape. The mixtape is dropping mid-summer. This track features Kayble. I did the beat and the artwork

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it sounds really basic and boring try refining your rap technique. What are some rappers you listen to?
 
You sound like an Odd Future reject.. but hey, Tyler probably didn't sound great when he first started rapping either.

Usually when someone posts their music, be it on NT/FB/Youtube wherever I usually expect them to sound ******ed and you didn't so, that's a positive. Just keep rapping and honing your craft.
 
Any reason you guys feel this way? Feedback would be awesome

The beat is really repetitive and kinda droning.

The raps aren't that bad, but your flow is robotic.

Then the braggadocio trash talk comes in and you don't really sound convincing with it.
 
Don't like the voice on this.

Subject matter is the same as everything else, nothing new to offer.
 
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