Playoff 8 Tee Shirt

[D.Josey]

I'm trying to design a basic tee shirt for my playoff 8's because I haven't found any to buy, so I need your opinions on this design...

The lyric is from an Ohio based rapper L.e in which he says, "My eights strapped like a strait jacket, crazy"

He also has another lyrics that says, "I can walk the ways of my eights boy, I'm on the move"

Which lyrics should I use, and how can I improve upon this shirt design?

Go easy on me, its my first time ever designing a shirt

Spark Notes: How can I improve this shirt design?

 

[D.Josey]

I'm trying to design a basic tee shirt for my playoff 8's because I haven't found any to buy, so I need your opinions on this design...

The lyric is from an Ohio based rapper L.e in which he says, "My eights strapped like a strait jacket, crazy"

He also has another lyrics that says, "I can walk the ways of my eights boy, I'm on the move"

Which lyrics should I use, and how can I improve upon this shirt design?

Go easy on me, its my first time ever designing a shirt

Spark Notes: How can I improve this shirt design?

 

[pmacvilay]

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

 

[pmacvilay]

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

 

[teflandon]

Originally Posted by PMacvilay

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

Agree 100%.

 

[teflandon]

Originally Posted by PMacvilay

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

Agree 100%.

 

[chamilitary03]

im with that too, the "my 8's" doesnt look right..
and maybe make the "crazy" blue? i dunno, just some suggestions!

 

[chamilitary03]

im with that too, the "my 8's" doesnt look right..
and maybe make the "crazy" blue? i dunno, just some suggestions!

 

[soleflyer23]

haha like the phrase

 

[soleflyer23]

haha like the phrase

 

[shoegallery]

yea man the back is crackk . keep putting ideas to the drawing board.

 

[shoegallery]

yea man the back is crackk . keep putting ideas to the drawing board.

 

[eltouha]

too many words up front makes the font look cheesy. i agree with the rest, the back works great.

tbh, the niketalk 8th year tshirt is the best jordan 8 inspired shirt by far. there's a sweet and simple graphic on the front representing the straps, and the back has a stitched on pull tag, just like the back of the shoe. i love that shirt and wish i had one.

 

[eltouha]

too many words up front makes the font look cheesy. i agree with the rest, the back works great.

tbh, the niketalk 8th year tshirt is the best jordan 8 inspired shirt by far. there's a sweet and simple graphic on the front representing the straps, and the back has a stitched on pull tag, just like the back of the shoe. i love that shirt and wish i had one.

 

[eltouha]

this one

still some there, but i can't justify USD$50 for a tshirt (awesome as it is) shipped to australia

 

[eltouha]

this one

still some there, but i can't justify USD$50 for a tshirt (awesome as it is) shipped to australia

 

[af92]

Originally Posted by TeflanDon

Originally Posted by PMacvilay

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

Agree 100%.

 

[af92]

Originally Posted by TeflanDon

Originally Posted by PMacvilay

I think "Strapped like a straight jacket" is more than enough.... "My 8's" just doesn't seem to work for me.
The back is awesome!

Agree 100%.

 

[thatkickkid]

add a little bit more design and i'd buy.

 

[thatkickkid]

add a little bit more design and i'd buy.

 

[dunks318ti]

sorry the shirts looks kinda corny to me...that niketalk shirt is LEGIT though!!!

 

[dunks318ti]

sorry the shirts looks kinda corny to me...that niketalk shirt is LEGIT though!!!

 

[doak]

nice

 

[doak]

nice

 

[cortes21]

not feelin the shirt..